Tag: AI

  • Learning Code

    I’ve been working on the coderoad
    Just to pass the time away
    Someone’s in the kitchen with AI
    Bowing on the old cello

    Soprano alto tenor bass
    The four each know their place
    One has a deja vu
    Looking back at you

    Oats peas beans and barley grow
    Timeline full of doodly squat
    Do you or I or anyone know
    How code from AI grows 

    Rounding off we come to end
    Our four part harmony
    She prompts you and you bump him
    Tomorrow we’ll meet again

    Four square play-court sections, each with round face: top left, brick gold A 4 star; top right, salt air C 2; bottom left, sand silver D 1; bottom right, pier water 3 B.
  • To Have and Have Not

    Somewhere along the way we are taught that writing is hard, and we come to believe that writing is hard. Hua Hsu thinks writing is hard, and he’s a professional writer, and teaches writing to boot, so he should know:

    “Writing is hard, regardless of whether it’s a five-paragraph essay or a haiku, and it’s natural, especially when you’re a college student, to want to avoid hard work—this is why classes like Melzer’s are compulsory. ‘You can imagine that students really want to be there,’ he joked” (p. 24, “The End of the Essay,” The New Yorker, July 7 & 14, 2025).

    Most activities seem hard if you’d rather be doing something else. “It is not irritating to be where one is. It is only irritating to think one would like to be somewhere else” John Cage said, in his “Lecture on Nothing.” But what about Hua Hsu’s claim that college students “avoid hard work”? Is that true?

    Definitions are hard: what is writing; what is work? Is avoidance not hard work? While it might be easier not to write, does it necessarily follow that writing is hard?

    Writing is easy. Most kids by the second or third grade can write. But keeping inside the lines as they are later taught, and writing becomes harder, until finally they quit trying to write and now apparently go to some Artificial Intelligence application where their writing is done via surrogate.

    “A.I. has returned us to the question of what the point of higher education is,” Hsu says (22). It might be too late, as the question seems in the process of being answered in the dismantling of institutions, and the answer for some currently sounds like, there is no point. In any case, the question is not new, being asked, and answered, over time, from John Henry Newman’s “The Idea of a University,” to Ivan Illich’s “Deschooling Society.” Illich’s ideas seem ripe for our time:

    “Many students, especially those who are poor, intuitively know what the schools do for them. They school them to confuse process and substance. Once these become blurred, a new logic is assumed: the more treatment there is, the better are the results; or, escalation leads to success. The pupil is thereby ‘schooled’ to confuse teaching with learning, grade advancement with education, a diploma with competence, and fluency with the ability to say something new. His imagination is ‘schooled’ to accept service in place of value. Medical treatment is mistaken for health care, social work for the improvement of community life, police protection for safety, military poise for national security, the rat race for productive work. Health, learning, dignity, independence, and creative endeavor are defined as little more than the performance of the institutions which claim to serve these ends, and their improvement is made to depend on allocating more resources to the management of hospitals, schools, and other agencies in question” (Ivan Illich, “Deschooling Society,” 1973).

    Writing is learned, like learning a musical instrument, developmentally and incrementally; writing is a process of addition, as Francis Christensen taught. His solutions described in his “Notes Toward A New Rhetoric: 9 Essays for Teachers (3rd Ed., 2007) to the teaching and learning of writing are among the best. Verlyn Klinkenborg’s  Several short sentences about writing (Vintage, April 2013) is also excellent and should be used in today’s English 101 classes (if there still are any) – though neither of these solutions do I put forth as absolute. I’ve met veteran classical musicians who cannot improvise, cannot play their instrument without a piece of sheet music to read from.

    Could Hemingway write? And if he could write, or maybe more importantly if you think he could not write, where did Hemingway learn how to write? In the beginning was the essay, English 101. Everyone had to take it, even the math majors. But Hemingway never made it to English 101. He wrote in high school, but it seems he learned to write while writing.

    “My name’s Laughton,” the tall one said. “I’m a writer.”
    “I’m glad to meet you,” Professor MacWalsey said. “Do you write often?”
    The tall man looked around him. “Let’s get out of here, dear,” he said. “Everybody is either insulting or nuts” (135).1

    1. Ernest Hemingway, “To Have and Have Not,” 1934, Hearst Magazines Inc. Scribner Classics, 1970. 0-684-17952-0. ↩︎
  • Dear Ai

    Dear Ai,

    Please make me dashing and daring and brilliant.
    I want to impress my friends and co-workers.

    Yours truly, Wanting More

    Dear Wanting,

    Easily done. But of course then no one will recognize you. You sure you want to go through with this?

    Sincerely, Ai

  • All A Draff

    All a draff 
    a draft
    raking thru
    the dregs
    adrift
    adrift

    I am not a robot
    Motorcycles
    Traffic Lights
    Buses Adrift
    No schedule
    No route map

    To the Dark
    Sidereal
    I am not
    Art I Fish All
    and dreg up
    cups bottom

    Cross Walks
    To & fro
    each cross
    its own horizon
    where the sky
    meets the water

    geometric requirements
    Social Skills
    (any skills
    for that matter)
    Marriage Classes
    Reading Glasses

    I had a friend
    Who had a friend
    I did
    befriend
    But that's not how
    I then met you

    They were discussing
    Punctuation &
    Grammar by which
    They meant
    To say nothing of
    The Endgame

    Which caused me
    To think of you
    Your dust at sea
    All along the edge
    Where things fall
    Off the way things go

    and pile up
    one thing
    on top of
    another
    akimbo
    a draff

    adrift
    nimble-fingered
    tho rathe
    rather nippy
    nimble
    masterly

    Anyway we
    We were talking
    About what
    Hard to know
    A flow
    Of pics & tics

    That's not true
    What I sd earlier
    When I sd I am
    Not "a machine resembling
    a human being and able
    to replicate certain human
    movements and functions
    automatically.

    'the robot closed the door behind us'"

    I am a robot
    Forced to crawl
    Adrift across
    Back and forth
    Sweeping up
    After you

    Pic after pic
    Falling
    Failing
    Fishing
    Adrift
    A draff draft

    A daff
    Salt water
    Taffy
    "she told me that my music
    was perfectly wonderful,
    and taffy like that"

    "according to R.U.R. management
    the robots
    do not 'like'anything."
    Are you are
    or Are you not
    a robot

    I'm not now
    Sure
    But years
    Have pissed
    And still
    I'm here a bit

    But true a
    Drift a draft
    Replaceable
    In War with the Nerds
    Dork and Dweeb
    Figure prominently

    Dwork wants
    To go Rome
    Deeb reminds
    They don't have
    Stars on their
    DL's

    Here a bit
    There a bot
    Everywhere
    A bit bot
    To boot
    To turn up

    A turnip
    In yr pocket
    Proves yr not
    A total android
    A mess on some
    Scientist's bench

    Turn on
    Tune in
    Drop out
    "During his last decade, Leary proclaimed the 'PC is the LSD of the 1990s' and re-worked the phrase into 'turn on, boot up, jack in' to suggest joining the cyberdelic counterculture."

    Drift on
    Draft in
    Draff out
    Right on
    Write stuff
    Write Off